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Post by Pain on Jul 30, 2009 2:26:28 GMT
Hey so I figured I'd sign up and do some rpig between other projects. Just one problem, all my accounts are still disabled thanks to someone who will not be named. I'd love to come back though if that could just be remedied.
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Post by Orgasmisado on Jul 30, 2009 6:24:07 GMT
That's cute, he acts like "he who will not be named" hasn't openly bragged about disabling all his accounts Also, it's called an IP ban.
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Post by "The" Ross Walker on Jul 30, 2009 10:48:14 GMT
Fuck, I'm sure his IP was banned.
EDIT: It appears not. Rookie mistake. Done now, though.
And I knew no good could come of opening this up to guests.
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Post by Pain on Jul 30, 2009 21:16:35 GMT
Well I was just looking to avoid calling Ross a dick publically, but whatever. I'm just looking to rp a little.
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Post by Orgasmisado on Jul 30, 2009 21:26:21 GMT
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Post by "The" Ross Walker on Jul 31, 2009 0:15:35 GMT
Oh fuck off, your IP isn't static.
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Post by Orgasmisado on Jul 31, 2009 0:20:41 GMT
Actually, I don't care which fed there you pick, because I'm already pissed off at that place after just my first match
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Post by "The" Ross Walker on Jul 31, 2009 0:25:33 GMT
WWEVolt?
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Post by "The" Ross Walker on Jul 31, 2009 0:36:20 GMT
Oh, and I assume you're pissed off because you lost? To be fair, I read the match and all RPs, and he's a decent writer too. You were probably penalised for focusing a bit much on your past, and trying to put yourself over as way above the match and the fed. Though, I'd still have given you the win, on account of two things. First, he hasn't really gone into much detail with description, and while I advocate not over-describing every fucking thing, he hasn't set the scene sufficiently enough for me. Second, which is really fucking offputting for me and ruined his entire second RP. When he's running you down, WHAT THE FUCK IS HE TALKING TO? He's sat down in a fucking bar, running you down to nobody in particular, no camera or anything. Is he meant to be a mental? If so, awesome, but if not, fuck man, that ruined the whole fucking RP, which was written to a decent level otherwise. At least you had your brother videoing.
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Post by Orgasmisado on Jul 31, 2009 0:43:30 GMT
Exactly what I'm saying. I can understand that people dislike I'm too anal about every single detail, but that's better than too little imo.
What I disliked the most is that in his first roleplay (and I told him this when he requested feedback) he showed us NOTHING about the character. And it showed he developed on that somewhat in the second (though I'm not bitter about that by any means) by bringing in his wife and daughter.
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Post by "The" Ross Walker on Jul 31, 2009 0:46:49 GMT
You have to hit a happy medium with description, otherwise your writing loses all flow. That was always my biggest criticism of Mark, and he's a fucking solid writer. Too much description turns a lot of people off. You need to hit the point where your audience can sufficiently visualise the situation, but there's enough there that they can use their imagination. It's a fine art. Something that can be good is to have description in your dialogue, the characters commenting on odd little details, gives you better flow.
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Post by Orgasmisado on Jul 31, 2009 0:51:25 GMT
Well at least FWF is coming back, because it's more enjoyable here, regardless of win or lose, and I can grow better here. The fedhead never did give me a straight answer about what he disliked, and the feedback I received from others was (among some other things), "you're no doubt the best writer I've seen at such an age.."
See, we haven't even had a show yet and I've already gotten more help.
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Post by "Dragonfly" Daniel Telmah on Jul 31, 2009 19:33:18 GMT
Hate to go against you, but, we're starting a fresh... and if you say you've banned him for a spelling mistake, that's silly anyway.
We actually do need members...[/color]
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Post by "The" Ross Walker on Jul 31, 2009 21:47:27 GMT
I also banned him for being a cunt.
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Post by "Captain" Joe Stall on Aug 1, 2009 3:15:32 GMT
Well that's just the cunt calling the cunt cunty.
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